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THE SUMMER WIND

The summer wind whispers its muted message of goodbye

To the late lit leisure evenings and clear azure sky;

To the laughter in children's voices and the murmur of the sea

That linger in our quiet hours now the autumn wind blows free.

 

The summer wind was always warm against our smiling faces

Custodian of happy days and fond remembered places;

Of folk we knew and times we knew that held us in their thrall,

So many things that made life sweet, the summer wind recalls them all.

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◄ FREEDOM

KIDDY WINKS ►

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 27th Sep 2018 19:44

Wonderful poem M .C. I am transported by your beautiful words. The warm sun on my cheek..lovely ?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 27th Sep 2018 15:42

I can only say "thanks" for the kind words of appreciation.
The current sunny weather and its occasional breeze got me
thinking of the ephemeral nature of the warmer days of the
year and how the summer wind (called by various names
in different parts of the world) carries a message that urges
us to make the most of those days but ultimately says its
farewell as the seasons turn.

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John Coopey

Wed 26th Sep 2018 23:42

Wonderful and wistful. "Bugger Autumn", I say.

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Hugh

Wed 26th Sep 2018 21:04

A delightful poetic breeze blown our way.Well done.

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Wed 26th Sep 2018 20:34

Wonderful! I really enjoyed this and by coincidence tonight here in Greece it is windy and as I'm reading your poem, I'm listening to the wind blow? Thank you!

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keith jeffries

Wed 26th Sep 2018 19:30

A delightful and beautifully written poem.
Thank you
Keith

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