Shopping
I saw you waiting
in the light
stood there waiting
standing there
saw you in the
window's light
standing facing
to the light
from the windows
tall and bright
from the shopping
arcade's light
from the arcade's
neon glare
I saw you shopping
standing there
I saw you standing
shopping there
saw you with your
shopping there
In the arcade
windows glare
stood there standing
unaware
stood there standing
chestnut hair
watched by shoppers
stood to stare
bathed within the
window's light
before the windows
tall and bright
in the light just
standing there
you stood waiting
I stood here
both of us stood
standing there
you stood standing
unaware
I watched you
as you watched her
both of us just
standing there.
words and foto T Carroll
reworked
Martin Elder
Sun 7th Oct 2018 22:56
Wow this is a long one for you Tommy but well worth the read with a good use of repetition as I think has already been said, been ...said...been said.
sorry lost the plot there for a moment
Nice one