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18

A dozen teenagers were on a night out.

They were stood outside a night-club hanging about.

Entrance into the night-club said they were not allowed.

So they hung about noisily with the crowd.

 

They saw five students they already knew,

And invited them to join them in the queue.

Now they were a gang of seventeen stood at the door.

One of them shouted ,"We only need one more ! "

 

Soon they were joined by a friend called Lyn.

Panic over.They needed to be 18 to get in !

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◄ A visit to New York

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 5th Oct 2018 12:41

How do you manage to come up with such unique themes? I needed a good laugh. As with all your poems Hugh the pay off is tremendous..thank you yet again you are an inspiration..??

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