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Bill's can win

Bill was a gambling man and just loved to win.

He was at a machine putting his money in.

"Oh my goodness I've won agen !

That's amazing I'm up to ten."

He placed his winnings on top of the machine.

 "I'm constantly winning I'm living a dream."

He jumped with joy as another can did fall,

He'd never won as much at all.

A lady shouted at him dressed in pink,

"Hurry up,you've had  enough now,I need a drink !!"

 

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 8th Oct 2018 06:40

Lucky Bill..nice one Hugh..?

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