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WHERE I LIVE

Where I live the lanes run this way and that

all confused changing their minds.

On scowling days they run with rain

to remind you which is up and which is down. 

 

Back on myself I go to places I thought I knew

and wonder about: doors replaced under feathered slate

this year's car behind a rickety gate.

A freshly dug bed behind a hedge privacy nevertheless shared.

 

All of this with cats on tiptoe watering holes,

no dogs unless on leads which of course is never news to me. 

And in a way everything fits and so thus sated I wend 

a snake and ladder again to where my door smiles and says:

did you enjoy your trip? (it knows me so well). 
 

 

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raypool

Wed 10th Oct 2018 22:27

Thanks for looking in David, Des, Big Sal, Any and Avishek, i'm grateful!

You got it, Hannah. I am a curious soul (my mum was the same, and she lived to be 96). Thanks for commenting.


Ray

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Wed 10th Oct 2018 18:11

The familiarity which can sometimes change and surprise.
Interesting poem which I enjoyed.

Hannah

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