The Echoes poetry competition to celebrate Write Out Loud's 20th anniversary is now open.  Judged by Neil Astley.

Competition closes in 9 hours and 27 mins. Get details and Enter.

Grimoire of a RaVeN Poetry of a twisted mind

entry picture

Let it go,

Let it fade away like a dream.

Let it be no more,

No more must it be.

Let it go,

This cold stab of memories.

Waiting in the shadows to steal my breathe from me.

As I remember you my soul begins to scream in torment

Those horrid memories of you better left forgotten

Wasting away on the shores of lost dreams and innocence

where I know, is where you should be.

Chilling madess of memories I wish not to know. 

So I let it go

As I let go of you once again

)0(

🌷(2)

◄ Forgiveness

5 The Hierophant ►

Comments

Profile image

raypool

Fri 12th Oct 2018 22:10

A poem about abandonment and learning in order to move on makes this quite deep and gives a shiver to the spine if you take in properly. A recognizable theme but with that extra dimension you do so well.

Ray

Big Sal

Wed 10th Oct 2018 12:39

Like a soldier's ode to the home he left behind. Great piece. ?

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message