Haiku
Below the surface
dark water silent shadows-
fish dart turtles dance.
Comments
Big Sal
Mon 22nd Oct 2018 15:51
Did you comment on your own poem??
You and these sheep you keep seeing . . .I don't know, that's hardcore man. You're hardcore. ?
Fish darts turtles dance..lovely..?
Mon 22nd Oct 2018 13:48
I love this-
d.knape
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carol falaki
Mon 22nd Oct 2018 19:52
Deep, I like it.