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THE HOUSE OF USHER

The House of Usher is up for sale

with a casket of secrets

and a built in tale.

Family histories tainted, unclean

bursting to be told

by those unseen.

 

The House of Usher increased in price

when it turned its back on Paradise,

with skeletons in cupboards

and other artefacts,

like unspeakable things in sacks.

 

The trees in the garden, weighed down in sorrow

perk up when the sun is in the hollow,

reminiscent of the valley of death

with a mist that stinks of dragon's breath. 

 

 Mournful rooms seem to go on forever,

scornful of the light's endeavour.

Its best kept promises are its most appealing,

held tight where no sight can reach the ceiling.

 

The House of Usher is up for sale,

but the uninvited should tarry awhile,

considering not just bricks and mortar

but the welcome smile of the Devil's daughter.

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raypool

Tue 6th Nov 2018 15:21

Cheers Hannah, a bit of fun for the Winter Solstice!
Thanks.

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Mon 5th Nov 2018 08:38

Incredibly creative.
All the elements of horror are there but in a poetic setting.

Hannah

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raypool

Sun 4th Nov 2018 21:30

Thanks for looking in, Martin; I'm glad you got the flavour.


Ray

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Martin Elder

Sun 4th Nov 2018 15:15

beautifully described as ever Ray

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raypool

Thu 1st Nov 2018 22:14

Big Sal, I appreciate your interest in my stuff, so different from your own. Vive la variety.

Cheers Jon, thanks for reading.

and Anya, for the tick.


Ray

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 1st Nov 2018 06:38

Great, Ray

Big Sal

Thu 1st Nov 2018 02:40

That middle stanza, the 3rd one, is like a poem within a poem. Nicely done on the set-up of this, and the execution was flawless.?

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