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DREAMS AND LIES

I thought the entering knife was bad

until I saw a bullet wound,

photographed in black and white

as when a life is ripped apart.

 

In the darkness of emotion

held securely in case of threat,

lies the answer to man's endeavour

for war to drive the body apart.

 

Such is the game that pulls men in

with all the weight of industry behind,

all its trickery and enterprise

justified by dreams and lies.

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raypool

Tue 6th Nov 2018 15:19

I'm always wary of writing about the overall philosophy of the engagements of war; so I started from a detail and worked out with whatever came to mind. Everyone can decide as I like to leave room for thoughts.
Just to say thank you all for reading and commenting.

David, Des, Hannah, Big Sal, Jon, Anya, Taylor, Jennifer and Ann.
Appreciated.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Mon 5th Nov 2018 18:10

Great as usual Ray -somehow remins me of the trumped up reasons for the war in Iraq!

Jennifer

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Mon 5th Nov 2018 08:36

The terrible things people do to one another instead of living in peace and cooperation.
Very well stated Ray.

Hannah

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 4th Nov 2018 20:27

Powerful poem Ray..?

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keith jeffries

Sun 4th Nov 2018 17:26

Ray,

The final stanza says it all. Thank you

Keith

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 4th Nov 2018 16:50

Great!! Wonderful, powerful words.

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