The beauty of Age
I see your face
is cracking
crazed;
the flaking of old paint
But beauty still remains;
in the Nirvana of
the final sun
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Wasn't quite sure whether you were talking about a person or an old door , either way it is nicely written and I love the mystery in that
Nice one
Sat 3rd Nov 2018 20:48
Thank you Keith and M.C. For your comments I very much appreciate them.
All the best des
A succinct summation of the consolation of age - the sun-like unremitting radiance that shines through the facia
that nature provides for the fading flesh.
Words of hope as we all go through the ageing process.
Thank you
Keith
Sat 3rd Nov 2018 14:04
Thank you for your comment Taylor and the like Anya, very much appreciated.
All the best des
Beautiful
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DESMOND CHILDS
Mon 5th Nov 2018 20:00
Thank you Martin, I’m glad you like the mystery. Much appreciated. Thank you Damon for the like.
All the best des