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Times of Trouble

Times of Trouble

 

In this time of remembrance.
Remembering the wars the battles the skirmishes;
the full horror only imagined.

 

From warm and comfortable chairs we gaze upon and wonder at the inhumanity.
We tut and huff and protest;
and then we put the kettle on, drink our tea put on a movie and forget.

 

Unable to cope with the reality, the horror, the injustice.
We cannot wear the woes of the world.
We cannot weep oceans; for oceans have been wept.

 

Burying deep the repulsion;
the fact that our young men have always been disposable to those in power.
Those who survive; remain neglected, silent, shocked, ruined.

 

And so behind closed doors,
where our own battles have to be fought,
our own wars waged, won and lost.
We hold a piece of those young men and women, a place of thanks, of sorrow, and once a year we take it out examine it, and face the horror. 

 

For those of us whose lives remain relatively untouched.
Wrapping those feelings carefully until  their annual outing is due is not too difficult.


For those whose lives are inextricably linked with the theatres of war.
There is no reprieve; no rest; no end.

 


© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

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kJ Walker

Fri 9th Nov 2018 22:11

Not wanting to just jump on the bandwagon and repeat what others are saying, but I have to agree, this is one of the better poems dealing with the subject.
I particularly liked the way you expressed the futility of war, without attempting to describe a battle scene.

This was a good honest piece of writing, and the emotions came across as honest and real.


Thank you Kevin

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 7th Nov 2018 18:24

Beautiful, Taylor.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 7th Nov 2018 18:18

Taylor, I'm sorry! My previous comment completely overlooked your poem's content.

I think you are right about our annual assuaging of guilt/thanks/remembrance or what you will, being an easy option to take. It's in our quieter moments that we take most in, not the overtly sentimental events that are held.

As has been said, it is one of the better poems dealing with this subject. Well done, good work!

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Martin Elder

Wed 7th Nov 2018 16:54

As has already been said I think this is among your best poems yet and also among your soundest in not attempting to glorify or white wash war in general and the effects it has on all parties concerned. I particularly love the line

'We cannot weep oceans; for oceans have been wept'


Nicely done Taylor

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 7th Nov 2018 16:53

I have been listening to the recorded voices of those who served in WW1, a series that is being aired this week on BBCR4.

What came across from all of them was just how ordinary/normal blokes they were and how matter of fact they were about recounting their experiences.

They said a lot with very few words, an ability lost on many today.

Of course many more said nothing at all!

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Hugh

Wed 7th Nov 2018 13:16

Powerful and truthful full of strong feelings for the troops."young men have always been disposable to those in power.Those who survive, remain,neglected,silent ,shocked and ruined."
So true and many are homeless.Well Done.

Big Sal

Wed 7th Nov 2018 12:22

Absolutely one of your best pieces.

The second stanza sums up the relationship most of the US has with the military: Never served themselves, but every boy scout and his dad wants to relive the glory but not the gory days.

I can now see that your style of writing has many more facets than I previously suspected. It'd be great to see you carry a theme for multiple poems or something. Whatever you choose to do next though, make it bang, and I'm sure you will keep outdoing yourself.

We have to shadowbox with ourselves in the mirror when no one else is around, for we don't all have dead meat in the freezer or a brother-in-law named, "Paulie". Sometimes we have to make our own opponents to better ourselves. Keep practicing, I can't wait to see where this all goes.

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Wed 7th Nov 2018 10:51

Taylor, this is remarkable and resonates strongly. Well done.

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keith jeffries

Wed 7th Nov 2018 10:00

Taylor,

This is a remarkably good poem which sums up the present day attitude to past wars and how most people cope with the reality of such terrible losses. The fourth stanza is the one which affects me personally.......remain neglected, silent, shocked and ruined. How true indeed.

Taylor well done and thank you for this

Keith

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