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Feelings

Feelings

 

As a young man I was invincible

a multitude of feelings I could shrug off

without feeling or a sense of any involvement

as one could brush dust off a jacket

The years pass by and I am no longer invincible

I have become emotional and vulnerable

tears are never far away in times of grief and sadness

What I see and hear now affect me deeply

The dust accumulates in layers

my heart is often rent in two

I need love and solace as never before

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 7th Nov 2018 21:08

Brought me to tears Keith. Thank you for sharing..?

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 7th Nov 2018 20:20

Love this, Keith.

Expresses my feelings, too.

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