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Time to stand still

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 Tock tock ,
 broken clock,
 hanging the wall…
 don’t know why he leaves you there,
 I’ve no idea at all.
 In fact, looking round this room right now
 it seems that time’s stood still,
 he’s never changed a thing in here,
 and I hope he never will.

Tock tock ,
 broken clock,
 hanging the wall…
 don’t know why he left you there,
 I’ve no idea at all.
 In fact, looking round this room right now
 it seems that time’s stood still,
 he never changed a thing in here,
 and I hope I never will


 

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Christopher Dawson

Wed 6th Oct 2010 12:07

I never re-visit, but I'm now pleased with this!

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Christopher Dawson

Tue 19th Jan 2010 17:36

cheers Tom, I'll try check it out.

n thank you JA, appreciated you guys.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Tue 19th Jan 2010 17:32

Short and simple... Reminds me of my poem "The Sad Broken Little Clock"

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John Aikman

Mon 18th Jan 2010 20:11

Now...that's a poem.

:)

Jx

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