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Sketches

If I could draw,

I would try to capture the shapes of your face

in shadows and charcoal. 

I would trace the birthmark on your cheek 

and the freckles (moth kisses) over your nose.

And the fires that are your eyes when I disappoint you. 

 

But I am hopeless with pen and ink. 

I only have words,

and words will never capture the trances you inspire 

when you shine like the sea

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Douglas MacGowan

Fri 9th Nov 2018 23:27

Thank you for your comments! You are really making me feel welcome at WOL.

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Ankita Srivastava

Fri 9th Nov 2018 21:53

Beautiful poetry

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keith jeffries

Fri 9th Nov 2018 19:57

What a fabulous compilation of words which capture the features of someone loved

and the fires that are your eyes when I disappoint you....

A first rate poem and well done

Keith

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Taylor Crowshaw

Fri 9th Nov 2018 19:46

Beautiful ?

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