Ache
He was her friend, and she said goodbye to him.
Though she didn’t see him often, when she did see him
the goodbye was so powerful it still lingered in the air she breathed
her heart ached for the friend she used to know
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A lot summed up by the brevity of words.
Nice one
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sun 18th Nov 2018 10:53
Wrenching. I felt every word.
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<Deleted User> (18474)
Sat 17th Nov 2018 20:31
Things left unsaid leave this poem open to the reader.
It's brevity gives it greater weight and power.
The third line is fantastic.
Thanks Megan for posting this.
Beno.
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raypool
Tue 20th Nov 2018 20:41
This feels like a hammer blow of emotion. Direct and powerful.
Ray