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The Space Of A Lifetime

 

When age adds up

we shrink

into ourselves

getting smaller and smaller

we lose stature

losing inches in height

we lose our memory

slowly but surely

then the smaller we get

the smaller our world becomes

I watched my mother in her late years

she had always been so active

she loved the daily crosswords

an avid reader of the daily news

yet eventually she just gave it all up

nothing held interest for her anymore

the world she grew up in was gone

all the people she knew had passed away

with dad gone as well

there was no one left to converse with

no one who knew the world she knew

there being no point she said very little

toward the end she only smiled

she just let it all slip away

her world shrank down

to her bed and her wheelchair

that's all that was left

of her space in the universe.

 

 

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◄ Sweet Dreams

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Hugh

Mon 19th Nov 2018 09:50

Great poem full of feeling and true words.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 18th Nov 2018 20:56

It is very true we just shrink and fade away..so sad. Lovely poem DK?

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Martin Elder

Sun 18th Nov 2018 19:29

No one who knew the world she knew

This is a line that sums this poem up very wel for me on a subject that can be very much closer to some of us than others.

Nice one

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keith jeffries

Sun 18th Nov 2018 17:41

dk.,

A poem tinged with some sadness but true also as contentment arrives.

Thanks

Keith

d.knape

Sun 18th Nov 2018 17:19

smaller and smaller
we become each day
until we eventually
pass away.

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