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More than Vision!

                                    More than Vision!

 

 

 

            I can see you!

Yes You!

            Dopple-ganging others,

Always walking streets alone,

But still, I see beneath your clothes.

 

 

            You never smile my way - but turn away,

As I try and fathom just what ‘ails’ - this star,

How far from human that you’ve travelled from,

Which mightiest, of Sun?

 

 

            Rest assured I see you,

Whoever you may be,

Perhaps the Chiron,

Or maybe from Niburu,

I see and yet for lack of speech,

I wonder; what you want?

 

 

            I play your game as you try and analyze my gift,

The psychiatrist – plain as day confused about this charm,

I’m not so blind as cannot see - you see,

So cease inquiry as human,

Talk to me in honesty my alien,

And let me know, of who you really are!

 

 

 

Michael J Waite 21stJanuary 2010.

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Isobel

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 09:49

A fascinating one, Mike. An 'insight' into the paranoid schizophrenic which leads us to question just who is blind and what is madness...
Very original - love the thought processes. I also envy you your creative spell - it takes me so long to write anything half decent. x

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Francine

Fri 22nd Jan 2010 22:32

You are writing some very different ones lately Mike!

I really like this one...
Hmmm...
'I play your game as you try and analyze my gift,
The psychiatrist – plain as day confused about this charm,
I’m not so blind as cannot see - you see,'

<Deleted User> (7073)

Thu 21st Jan 2010 13:14

Mike you poems are quite spooky, I heard Niburu was a rogue planet on a very Large Eliptical orbit, that close passes Earth every so many thousands of years and causes Chaos....an Extinction level event. The question is do they really walk among us?TC

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