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OXO to Oranges - Safety Words for Loving Couples!

By no stretch of the imagination do I promote rape! But let’s have it right, behind the closed doors of a loving couples bedroom, or wherever in role play, the Law could make many a criminal out of many a man, or woman. This poem was written in response to a conversation I heard between two young women at Bury Bus Station.

In all honesty, where No, can, sometimes seem confusing, there is offering of hope in the title, for those couples of a loving disposition.

 

Above all, make love in all its forms, not war.

 

 

 

                        OXO to Oranges - Safety Words for Loving Couples!

 

 

 

            I want to hold you down,

I want to hold you down and express myself as Man,

            But I’m not allowed!

            I want to hold your arms above your head,

And feel your legs part while stubbornly

You whisper forcefully, No!

 

 

            I want to hold you down and enter you,

And hear you moan as dominantly I take you,

But again according to the Crown,

I am not allowed my expression as a man.

 

 

            The British Woman;

Will scream only the boredom in her man,

            Having invested laws that will condemn,

            Be put in place should escape be wanting

For negotiation, the courts themselves

Exacting forbidden use of carnal knowledge,

While the next generation of fillies express

Candidly at bus stops;

            “I can’t wait, till ‘we’ can rape our Men!”

 

 

 

Michael J Waite 21stJanuary 2010.

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Francine

Sun 24th Jan 2010 15:58

I agree with Isobel...
I read this one, but didn't really know what to say - for once - LOL ; )

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Isobel

Sun 24th Jan 2010 10:49

I guess there are polar extremes to every proclivity. Very many women may like a strong, assertive man. Can't imagine that many want to go your ex girlfriend's extremes, though Banksy - although like Mike says, who knows just what goes on behind closed doors. I guess anything goes so long as you know your partner well and trust them. I would imagine this is very dangerous territory for both sexes othewise.
A controversial poem Mike - don't expect many comments on it LOL - last time I commented on this same theme, I had a lot of back lash!

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Thu 21st Jan 2010 22:38

a lovely girl I was seeing many years ago, when asked what really turned her on, asked me to tie her up & rape her - but I had to do it like I really meant it - she wasn't going to submit. I thought, well, OK, whatever turns you on, but I'm not at all sure this is going to do anything for me. I was wrong - it was one of the best things ever - for both of us judging by her reactions both during & after. - just my 3 cents worth. B

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