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Getting Over It

 

The holidays gone

Thanksgiving in the rear view

so is the excitement

which came and went so suddenly

we waited for weeks

we anticipated

food  song  conversation

the drama of relatives and politics

weeks building to a crescendo

it got so we could hardly wait

and then BLAM

   it's after midnight

and it's suddenly over

all the stuff

of stuffing and turkey

yams and cranberries and pie is gone

along with all the joy

we are now sad inflatables

sagging over the landscape

giant globs

with all the air let out.

 

 

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 24th Nov 2018 08:39

I agree with Keith the last four lines would describe the scene in the majority of homes in the UK on Christmas day. Inspired..?

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keith jeffries

Fri 23rd Nov 2018 21:58

DK.,

We do not celebrate Thanksgiving here in England but your words are equally applicable for Christmas. The last four lines are superb. You were truly inspired when you wrote this.

Thank you

Keith

d.knape

Fri 23rd Nov 2018 21:23


we wait and wait
then too soon spent
the Holiday just
came and went.

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