MAGIC MOMENTS
A record slides from within its sleeve
palm supported to the deck;
the needle descends,
he takes his place
to where she curls up with that special face.
While reaching down to pull him off
he stays her hand for Rachmaninov,
a musical climax steadily building,
his spirit soaring.
Something about his isolation worries her
as he closes his eyes;
she sulks a little as the music rolls on.
She needs him more than ever now,
but he knows that musical moments like this
should not be spoiled by carnal bliss.
raypool
Fri 30th Nov 2018 19:42
Thanks for your comments as follows:
Poemographic - thanks for landing on my offering. I take that as a compliment! I like it.
Kate, always nice that you read me. Glad you liked it, even though it is saucy.
Wow Mark. That is really a tongue twister.... !
Eric, your comment made my day. Really its nice to be analysed in that way. It had me thinking about the elements of writing.
Thanks so much.
David, Shostakovich is often shocking, Rachmaninov is enrapturing, but either way tempted by that hint of stocking(sorry Stockhausen). Glad you liked it mate. I was thinking of you as I wrote it.
Thanks Brian, Anya, Jon and Taylor for your invaluable support.
Cheers and love to all.