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marriage tense

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Are you in the marriage tense?

Or is it in the past tense?

Will I be your future tense?

Or are you in the marriage, tense?

Is your past imperfect?

Will our future be pluperfect?

Or are you in the marriage tense

While I’m the past imperative?

May I be interrogative

And ask you if you’re negative?

Are you in the marriage tense?

Cos I’m feeling so subjunctive!

 

 

 

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Dave Bradley

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 22:07

Enjoyed this Ann. Good use of language for playful effect

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Rodney Wood

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 19:57

I like the way the ending seems to bring a blissful conclusion.

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kath hewitt

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 16:25

i like this, well done x

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Francine

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 15:49

This is adorable Ann!
I can so relate to the tenses... Made me smile : )

Francine x

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