Summer Storm
Summer Storm
At seventy miles an hour
They sped down the highway
Wind whipping back desultory talk.
Green slid by – trees and farms and meadows,
With odd punctuation of a one-light town.
He fixed the centre line.
She sighed, and stared across the fields
To count dilapidated barns.
Smoky blue chicory veiled the ditches
Fed by tongues of fire lily stalks.
Dark-eyed daisies preened their sightless faces
Challenging the torpid sun to burn
Golden as they.
‘Are you listening to me?’
The fields blurred.
She turned to him.
He drove intensely,
With jittery fingers and a wary smile.
‘Yes, of course.’
She drew herself back into the confines of the car
And focussed only on him.
In the blackness of the pre-dawn
The wind gusted violently.
The old house shuddered up its joints
From the cellar,
Groaning.
Lightening sliced the roiling sky;
Thunder exploded,
Wrenching at the windows.
Through blank panes stiletto shadows
From the thrashing trees
Bounded down the bleak corridors
Like goblins seeking sin.
Uneasy
She edged away from his satiety
And shrank into the tangled sheets,
Afraid of the noise
And perhaps the wrath of God.
In the morning birdsong fluted the air
Heady with the breath of wild herbs.
As she lingered down the sodden path
Lilies in the tall grass reached for her eagerly.
She sighed, and caressed a silken petal.
But he was revving the engine;
She hurried, tangling her feet in wiry roots.
The brown-eyed daisies never saw a thing.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Rachel McGladdery
Tue 2nd Feb 2010 20:56
I wasconvinced I had commented on this already...I must be going mad! I loved it.Even though the human drama was gripping the images that have stayed in my head are the amazing flower images, the chicory flowers, the fire lilies and the daisies not seeing a thing. Really lovely.Delicate!
Rachel
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