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Morbid curiosity.

Is it cold where you lie,
listening to the scratch of your companions?
Or do the newly turned sods keep you warm?

Does the dark hurt your eyes,
stinging the lids and bringing a tear?
Or are they closed against the hidden grain?

Can you hear the words he speaks,
words chosen for mourning and comfort.
Or is it muffled beneath the turf?

Do you taste the air,fresh and new.
or are you choking on fetid breaths?
Do you feel the fire in your lungs as you gasp?

Did you feel the fingers of death upon your shoulder?
Or did he whisper into your ear, enchanting you, making you
fall to your knees with his trickery?

Do you remain there, blackened and anguished?
Or do you run free, amongst the stars and moon,
trailing your tale behind you?

I wish i knew.
 

◄ Hourglass

Not quite goodbye. ►

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kath hewitt

Fri 29th Jan 2010 14:16

Again, many thanks to you all.
I am delighted with all of your comments. x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 28th Jan 2010 12:46

I had meant to get back to this. I really like it. I wouldn't have called the curiosity 'morbid', just natural. The personification of death is as old as human thought, but it is never 'finished' or boring.
Every human being has to rethink Death again, and your ideas are just as unique as the next person's.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 27th Jan 2010 20:13

Thank heavens that we don't know Kathryn or else someone would do a reality show from beyond the grave. This is a nicely written curious piece and I loved the last line.

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winston plowes

Wed 27th Jan 2010 12:20

liked this one Kathryn, etherial. Win

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 27th Jan 2010 12:05

I hope they are all trailing their comet tails behind them Kathryn, I really do. When I lost my person, I just had to go out into the Januaryt night and sit in the garden looking up for shooting stars. I saw two, and it helped! But that's another story - or poem! I think this poem is excellent. xxx

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