The Critic
i ain't much of a poet
i just play around with it
because i found out wimmen
like poets
once in a while
a pome will pop up
in my mind
that's purdy good
then i'll read it
to my old dog
here on the porch swing
his head layin gentle in my lap
the dog is good to read to
he listens well
and critiques the pome
with his tail
two wags is good
3 wags is excellent
no wag means it stinks
but most of all
he is the smarter of us two
he never is too critical
he knows damn well
where his next meal
is coming from.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sat 12th Jan 2019 16:11
Bloomin' brilliant!