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JESSIE

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◄ The Candle Game

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Rachel McGladdery

Thu 4th Feb 2010 10:24

Another for the illustated book!I can see it so clearly. I totally related to the feeling a little vanilla compared to the exotic Jessie, lovely poem!
Rach
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John Coopey

Wed 3rd Feb 2010 21:41

I like it too. I can't help preferring rhythm and rhyme. Also I can understand it (which I can't always with some of the more oblique poems).
John Nice-but-Dim

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