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Meltdown

Meltdown

 

The furnace of her loins

glowed red with passion

comcentrated lust

oozing from every pore

of her writhing body ;

THEN

THE

BLOODY

PHONE

RANG !

 

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Dave Caplan

Mon 4th Feb 2019 22:08

Thank you all for your feedback.

There really isn't a part two.
The best analogy I can come up with is comparing it with steelworks.....once the furnaces cool down men get layed off !

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 4th Feb 2019 15:38

DH Lawrence meets a certain great Irish comedian!
Passion and practicalities...never a match made in heaven.

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raypool

Mon 4th Feb 2019 14:09

Such a shame, because we need part two David. Mind you for those of us who remember, there used to be dirty phone lines - you'd pay dearly for the privilege.

Ray

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lisa donohoe

Mon 4th Feb 2019 07:50

You never fail with the humour david.. Haha great job ?

Frances Macaulay Forde

Mon 4th Feb 2019 04:24

Ha-Ha!!!! Love the surprising switch.

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