GR (In the South)
GR (In the South)
(revised version)
In the realm of vineyards and olive trees
In the citadel of hot humid nights
We wasted away dancing in the breeze
Counting pointlessly the stellar lights.
The foliage urged us in clandestine meetings
we leaned back and let go of our innocence.
Between childish scribblings and philosophic readings,
entranced by the fragrant citrusy essence,
a fine blend of dry leaves and wet soil and tangerine;
we softly engaged in our first timid contact.
Then the beauty of the land-The Eternal Youth clad in green-
came and slipped it back into our palms intact.
In the south our dusks are sanguine
And our dawns smell of freshly dug dirt
No caress can appease our pathos within
Feral beasts wrestle underneath our shirt.
Over the mountain tops has passed not a single day!
The only thing that ages here is wine.
I keep saying "I must leave, but maybe not today..."
My poor soul quivers before this stuning sunshine
And floods and hurricanes have tried to drown Her,
quakes and winds tried to bring her to Her knees,
wars have beaten Her and even I have looked down on her.
But nothing can break Her for She commands the seas!
And each ring inside each tree trunk a ring on my finger.
Each wrinkled fallen fruit my grandmother's hand.
And even Time himself felt the desire to linger
Bow down and shed a tear over this ancient, untamed land.
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GR (In the South)
(Original Version)
In the land of vinyards and olive trees
In the citadel of hot humid nights
We wasted away dancing in the breeze
Counting pointlessly the stellar lights.
The foliage urged us in secret meetings;
we leaned back and let go of our innocence.
Inbetween childish scribblings and philosophic readings
entranced by the fragrant, citrussy essense;
a fine blend of dry leaves and wet soil and tangerine;
We silently engaged in our first timid contact.
Then, Beauty- The Eternal Youth- clad in green
came and gave it back to us intact.
In the south our dusks are sanguine
And our dawns smell of freshly dug dirt
No caress can appease our pathos within.
Of our tongue noone gets a single word.
Over the mountains tops has passed not a single day!
The only thing that ages here is wine
I keep saying "I must leave!" but maybe not today...
I can't bear to turn my back on this sunshine.
And floods and hurricanes have tried to drown Her
quakes and winds tried to bring Her to Her knees
Wars have beat Her; and even I have looked down on Her...
But nothing can break Her for She commands the seas.
And each ring on each tree trunk, a ring on my finger.
Each wrinkled fallen fruit, my grandmother's hand.
And even Time Hismelf felt the desire to linger.
No force of nature, no knave can tame this immortal land.
Mae Foreman
Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:17
Keith, thank you so much for the kind words! ? The South has its ways, doesn't it?! You could spend an entire lifetime there just cause you wake up one day and it's so heartwarming lu sunny and by the end of your life it feels like it was all just one smoothe pleasant day...at least in poetry! Other than that, many problems! But there are some days that just make you feel like you in heaven. It's a wormhole, it sucks you up! Especially the providence in certain places!!!
It sounds as if you are one very lucky gentleman! I'm happy for you!?
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Mae