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The Oxygen thief

Look its 

Me

Please look

See

Me

I’m here so 

You can see

Me

I’m loud 

And here

Near

See me

And hear me

And see me

Its why

I’m me

Why I’m 

Here

See me

Be there and look

At me

Hear me with

All your 

Ears

And soul

Give me it

All

All your belief

All your relief

Its me

Here

The oxygen

Thief.

🌷(6)

selfishness

◄ Soul?

Panama Love ►

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 11th Feb 2019 20:34

Can't breathe! Perfect example of how line breaks makes a poem read. ?

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Mae Foreman

Mon 11th Feb 2019 18:59

Excellent! ?
Thank you!
Mae

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