autonomous
I'm Into the Blue
I Disconnect--
every evening's struggle
sees another day come up short
leaving me zeroed in
a deep-freeze limousine
that never passes go...
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Exceptionally good, and that's official Rachel. Just a sense of completeness of an experience but with that characteristic airiness.
Ray/
elPintor
Tue 19th Feb 2019 18:24
Every once in a while, when you think you might get a leg up...
Thanks, all, for reading and your lovely comments--the night calls ;
These short line's
Speak absolute volumes
Incredible
Thank you for sharing x
Thank you for sharing this nice poem dear poetess kate.
<Deleted User> (19913)
Mon 18th Feb 2019 11:35
Oh that deep freeze limousine line is a killer. Wish I wrote it Rachel.
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elPintor
Sun 24th Feb 2019 15:46
Experience can be something of an intolerant master, Ray.
Thanks for lookin' in,
Rachel
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