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Wild Flowers

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In the blue-green meadow

of my silent soul, 

scorpion grass - 

dormant for decades,

now grows wild and free, 

sustaining me, 

spreading love

for the aching world

to behold its beauty.  

forget-me-notloveNaturepoetry about beautywildflowers

◄ Super Snow Moon

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 9th Apr 2019 04:59

Thank you Orenda! ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 26th Feb 2019 13:40

Thank you Jason, Mae, Dorothy and Kate! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave an encouraging comment.?

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 12:33

Gorgeous

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Mon 25th Feb 2019 11:25

"in the blue- greeen meadow,
of my silent soul"

What a beautiful opening line, it immediatly calms and sooths, then to end with -

"for the aching world to behold it's beauty"

I feel both soothed and saddend.

It is an 'achingly' beautiful poem.

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Mae Foreman

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:51

Wow! Incredibly beautiful piece Vautau!
Thank you ?
Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 25th Feb 2019 09:15

I really like this, especially with the reading, it has a really beautiful flow. Mind you, it is read, really well which helps.?

J.

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