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Once We Were Gods

 

 

Once we were gods

to our children

then time wore away

that image

and like the mountains

we slowly eroded

into hills

then

valleys

eventually

holes.

 

 

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Don Matthews

Sun 17th Mar 2019 11:29

I like people who are unconventional
With views that get warped in the rain
My own view syncs nicely with your view
Seems like we've got very warped brains ?

d.knape

Sun 17th Mar 2019 02:51


my view is warped
it was left out in the rain!


haha.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 16th Mar 2019 15:43

A clever imagination at work here.

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keith jeffries

Sat 16th Mar 2019 12:36

An interesting perspective.
Thank you
Keith

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