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The Door Of Naked Souls

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Eternal, ever present, the Door Of Naked Souls,

No toll to pay except one, you must carry nothing through,

It is the beginning and the end of every single road,

No matter the traveller, this much is ever true.

 

No trinkets nor garments may cross its threshold,

You must exit as you enter, stripped to the bone,

And though you step in, to the arms of another,

The outward step must be taken alone.

 

Do not fear the door, it is not evil, nor vicious,

It bears no ill will, is neither foe nor friend,

It is neither benevolent nor malicious,

Just the door of beginnings, and the door at the end.

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Whispering Night ►

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Heart of Lead

Mon 22nd Apr 2019 22:22

Beautiful, truly stunning analogy of life. Something truly exquisite about the door symbolism that takes a unique and heartfelt perspective. Grounding and yet powerfully whimsical.

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 14th Apr 2019 19:14

Thank you for liking this, Mae, Mona, Frances, and may it be a long time before any of us cross its threshold ?.

J. x

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mona s

Sun 14th Apr 2019 07:11

So beautiful and poignant.. Great one Jason..

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Mae Foreman

Sat 13th Apr 2019 18:57

Beautiful Jason! Heavy with symbolism and as always in perfect rhyme and rhythm! Kudos!
Thank you ?
Mae

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