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Poppy - Columbine - Tortola.

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Vinyl bright, wipe-clean tea cloths of names,

women in technicolour dresses,

arms soft and round and brown,

a basketful of fruit for you,

a promise in a full red lip and white, wet teeth.

 

Oh how mis-named

for seal grey bullets

smaller than a trawler.

Like tiny things

upon a board of battleships.

Just 2 squares,

just 2 co-ordinates

and you'd be lost.

sailing small

on a vast frozen ocean,

gun metal grey

like the bobbing toy above.

 

We have a model in the middle room,

you can see the gun he manned,

it's housed in glass

on blue green white tipped plasticine.

◄ Death Comes To Fleetwood

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Emma McCourty

Tue 23rd Feb 2010 12:14

Rachel~~~ brilliant, powerful and strong imagery in this piece. I love it. Full of real emotion.
Take care~~~ em

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 21st Feb 2010 22:51

Hi Rach-methinks a poem about Dad?
seems very personal.If I,m right,have no worries chuck,you,ll see him again-best regards Rachel-Stefanxx

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