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the future is now

aside from an anguished human cry
I've always thought the wail of the train
must be the most woeful sound known to man

how many nights I've wished the dark

 

would pause

to catch the moments of peace

it steals


weaving terrors like whispers of cloth
"wake up you can sleep when you die"


...the train will not wait for me
and I know there'll be no one waiting down the track

and the train will not wait for you

my love


get on...

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elPintor

Wed 8th May 2019 23:01

Thanks for all the responses, comment or otherwise )

Rachel

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Martin Elder

Tue 7th May 2019 20:49

I love that line 'how many nights I wished the dark would pause' what makes it even better is the way you have placed the 'would pause all on its own. Your poetry rarely ceases to delight.

Nice one Rachel

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Stu Buck

Sat 4th May 2019 16:34

great writing rachel and the formatting works well
the final line is pleading but still exudes strength

good stuff

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