answer
when they begrudge you and call you a curse
with sly smiles and subtle words
what right have the shadows to prevent you?
my love will be an axe a scythe a flame
and you will dry your tears in the sun...
Comments
Fabulous gem , subtle and meaningful Rachel. I won't try to be clever in the analysis, as you have revealed such s personal comment.
Ray
elPintor
Thu 25th Apr 2019 10:50
Hi Jason,
I was writing this and was reminded of a song I used sing to my son when he was an infant...
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=m8kQs91fj-w
He used to look up at me with darling sleepy eyes--so peaceful and sweet.
I knew without a doubt from the day I set eyes on him that love shows its truest forms in ways Hallmark will never be deep enough to express
Thanks-- glad it moved you to respond )
Rachel
Succinct and powerful.
J.
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elPintor
Sun 28th Apr 2019 18:36
Thanks Ray. My schedule is a bit of a juggling act lately. But, it's good to hear from a familiar voice.
I'm always up for hearing interpretation, but surely allowing a glimpse into the personal can't be a crime.
Rachel