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Let Heaven Wait

 

Old age confirms

my destined fate

quite plainly now

I'm out of date

 

What I wanna do

I simply cain't

what I wanted to be

I frankly ain't

 

Now memories are

getting faint

I must admit

I ain't a saint

 

Age aches and pains

my main complaint

still I remain

let Heaven wait.

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

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<Deleted User> (21487)

Tue 21st May 2019 20:28

I like your defiance -

Dorothy

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Jon

Tue 21st May 2019 18:52

Hi there
You sound like my Dad who says he's out of date regularly and is up and down health wise and emotionally, yet he's 92 soon so he isn't doing too badly
Great stuff!
Jon

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 21st May 2019 17:58

More enjoyable words from this source - to which I reply:
Age can see resources sapped;
Remember nature - just adapt! ?

<Deleted User> (21818)

Tue 21st May 2019 12:34

None of us are saints and we all have some regret otherwise life would be perfect...Heaven forbid life be perfect. ? ....a piece of advice my friend...take the word 'old' out of your dictionary. It's of no use...'wise' is a better choice.

d.knape

Tue 21st May 2019 10:39

i will be writing in the grave
by candlelight
by God!

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