Before I Go (Epigram #1)
Should this be my last night on earth
I shall say this with glee
From womb to tomb, from birth to death
I'm yours and yours I'll be.
Comments
Ah Mae... how 'womb to tomb' just rolls off the tongue. A phrase so simple which has never occurred to me before. Well done....
Very well put Jason! ?I suppose you're right. It's sheer temptation sometimes, you know!?
Mae
Nothing wrong with that so nothing to forgive. Eloquence is the brush we paint with, so there's nothing wrong with using a bit of flourish sometimes.
J. x
Oh yes! Happens all the time... Some times I strive to find something worth saying just to use a nice phrase... May God forgive me?
You too, huh?!?
Mae
Ah, you do that too!?
Thank you my dear Jason! I had it in my notebooks for far too long and didn't know what to do with it. Seems like it fit well into this one!
Thank you ?
Mae
I do love this for it's brevity and the amount of meaning packed into it, but my favourite part of all is, "From womb to tomb," that my friend is just brilliant.
J. x
Thank you so much Keith !?
Mae
A brief poem which carries hundreds of words. A gem
Thank you for this
Keith
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Mae Foreman
Wed 22nd May 2019 07:43
Thanks a lot dear Don!?