Thank You Mother
But of all the lies you ever told me
the happy ending
of the fairytale of us was the sweetest!
And of all the lessons you ever gave me
The one not put in spoken words
I made into written law and abide by every day.
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A good poem Mae. I'm not sure about it being a Haiku. Do category labels matter? Probably not when it is such a good poem.
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Thank you dear Jason ?
Love both of those Mae, best haiku's for me.
J. x
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Mae Foreman
Fri 14th Jun 2019 12:00
Thank you dear Fish! I've given this a lot of thought... It doesn't quite apply to the original rules of Haiku. Then again what do you call a three-lined non-rhyming verse? I'd better take down the Haiku from the title.
Thanks for the feedback ?
Mae