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Retirement

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The old man in the window seat

is setting quietly to his routine,

folding up the sleeves

of his Oxford shirt inch by inch

until the sun falls across his bare arms

 

then with just a smile

he signals to the waitress and waits

watching the hushed street

after the morning rush:

a mother with a pram,

a homeless man conferring with his dog,

a few pigeons plucking

at the fallen spring blossom.

 

He takes his glasses from his breast pocket

cleans each lens carefully with his napkin

and opens his morning paper

presses out it’s creases with his palm

sets it between his knife and fork, slowly

devours it until he leaves satisfied

knowing nothing in the world

will escape him this day.

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Jun 2019 22:13

Like David I cannot imagine ever retiring, but the attention to detail is what this makes such a masterpiece for me.
Nice one Tom

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 16th Jun 2019 16:27

Well penned...a vignette that's vivid in its depiction of an orderly (and
contented?) life. Winding down is one of the pleasures of later years,
allied to achieving personal aims and pleasures previously denied
through pressures of a working life.

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John Marks

Sat 15th Jun 2019 15:40

...in the detail squat the nightmare toads of unfenced existence. Well-penned Tom. ?

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jennifer Malden

Sat 15th Jun 2019 15:20

Lovely writing Tom - sets it between his knife and fork, slowly devours it until he leaves satisfied - a homeless man conferring with his dog .... One can really visualise the whole scene.

Jennifer

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