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A Dying Art

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If dying is to consider as an art

which school should be preferred?

Stolidly ballooned out by Botero,

suffering from a cruel Dali distortion

or Picassoed weeping in a bouillon cube?

 

An erotic  marshmallowish Saska

smiling naked from dark furry folds?

A plain Stanley village housewife

in cardigan, blouse and tweed skirt?

 

Brilliantly dissolved Baconlike

(but frightening at the funeral).

Rosily, floridly fair by Pierre Auguste

or poised on dusty pastel points by Edgar?

 

 

Elegantly swan-necked in chrome

and yellow ochre by 'Maudit'?

A socialite in chiffon froth or golden patchwork

à la Gustav, or by Egon with all revealed?

 

With flowing locks like Simonetta,

in gentle reassuring wildflower meadow,

no frantic poppies here appearing.

I'd opt for Sandro my last day

or for that matter, any day.

 

 

 

 

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Devon Brock

Wed 19th Jun 2019 23:10

Chagall - every time I look at my wife, my marriage - I think Chagall!

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jennifer Malden

Wed 19th Jun 2019 23:03

Thanks Don, Jason and Martin for the comments. In case anyone is interested - but prob you can recognize the first names - Saska was Rembrandt's young wife, and in an Edinburgh Gallery there is a portrait of her rosily, floridly naked in a dark fur! As Fish said, Stanley is Stanley Spencer, then Pierre Auguste Renoir , Edgar Degas, Maudit = maledetto = Modigliani, Gustav Klimt, and Egon Schiele. The girl in the picture is Simonetta Vespucci posing for Sandro Filipepi's (Botticelli's) Primavera. She has the most incredibly 'modern' face, could be a present day Vogue model, and she was a famous Florentine beauty. It has always been one of my favourite paintings, and I can go and see it any day, apart from having to queue for hours. Jennifer

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Don Matthews

Wed 19th Jun 2019 13:08

Most clever

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 16th Jun 2019 23:07

The thing I really like about this is, apart from being a pleasure to read, it's made me want to learn more about art.

J. x

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Martin Elder

Sun 16th Jun 2019 22:19

I love your use of art here as a subject to write a poem. I often find paintings a great source of inspiration as I do galleries. I also bow to your knowledge of artists and paintings.
Nice one Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 16th Jun 2019 20:26

Thanks fish! Thanks also DOroThy for the like. Jennifer

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afishamongmany

Sun 16th Jun 2019 20:16

An interesting read Jennifer - Your knowledge of painters is more detailed and extensive than mine but I'll go for a Spencerian Resurrection (maybe with a tad more zaz).
Live well
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