Lost in space
His face was as dark and grizzled
As the thoughts running through his head
His half -shaved expression breaking up with a confused grin
Laying on his bed he spoke to whoever might listen
Whether there or in his head
This stranger in a strange land
Misunderstood by others and himself
He cuddled and coddled the memories
Behind his darting deepening eyes
As he walked through a forest of unlisted and undistinguishable trees
Paths crossed re-crossed and interweaved
Some still open others hidden or disappeared
Not able to voice that he was far from home and lost
Asking himself and anybody else
Where he was
What he was doing, why couldn’t he go home yet
Or have a cigarette
Ticking off an inventory
He did not recognise as his
Getting up and going to the toilet
Then returning to another bed
Getting dressed and waiting to go home
But transferred to another ward instead
Martin Elder
Mon 1st Jul 2019 20:17
Thanks to Rachel. Jon, Lisa. Dorothy and Devon for liking and to Don, Keith, Ray, Leon, Rose and Mae for commenting.
This is in fact another poem based on my stay in hospital for a week back in May. It is about the guy in the bed next to mine who evidently had dementia and whilst he could communicate with people he had no idea where he was at what he was doing there most of the time. It was incredibly sad.
Don it was world totally alien to him thus the title.
Keith I don't really know how old he was but probably only a few
years older than me which probably makes it all the more sad
so Ray my friend you hit the nail on the head in terms of the character being real. I have had first hand experience with my own departed father with this illness. It is not good to see.
Leon thank you so much for your appreciation ( Glad you like the picture. I am currently too shy to show my entire visage)
Rose my heart just went out to this poor guy, particularly when he was calling out for relatives that were not there
Mae I love your poetic observations, swimming with frustration
Thanks again Guys for reading and commenting , it is much appreciated