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Where Is The War?

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Where is the war to make sense of all things?
My mother's mother was fond of saying,
“I pity you boys, with no war to fight.”
I'd recite this on dark mornings whilst traipsing
Towards the bus aside the road in mist.

Where lines of cars, shunted slowly with faces
Encased in glass like queues of roaring ghosts.
Trawling with half lit eyes through the gloaming,
The bus riders sat pink eyed and cold as carp.

What bells are ringing for these traveling dead? 
When morning comes in the alarms attack
Oh death, oh hurry boys! Lift your trouser 
And belts! The time is right, awake to work!

Now war is staged in far away places
What's left for these young men who know no hell?
But a stagnant pool freedom has created
That's saps the purpose and estranges the self.

What's been won by sixty years of silence?
But a slow, sad separation of sense-
Till the modern mind has drifted from course
And the body has deserted intent.

I recall my grandmother on frosty mornings,
Whilst passing the field where cows moon strangely
(Pounding the same ground over and over,
Retracing their worlds pathway to slaughter)
“I pity you boys with no war to fight!
Where is the war to make sense of all things?
Where is the war to tell you wrong from right?”

◄ Defense Of The Drunken Poet

To A Teacher ►

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 9th Mar 2010 07:32

A good poem. (Do cows moon? I guess that would look strange! ;-) I love "cold as carp"! I would remove one sylluble from the line and change "That's saps the purpose and estranges the self." to "That saps the purpose and estranges self." Just flows better for me. And once again, an excellent drawing!

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Dave Bradley

Tue 9th Mar 2010 00:28

Well constructed and very thought provoking, Tom. Some great images too.

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