Place the valve
of your lip's
and your smile's
breath against
my cheek and
breathe a note
to inform me
of its lasting
arrangement
and gentle
proposition.
While sighing
from within
you play now
the music's
pressed tone.
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Very interesting words and music Tommy.......
Devon Brock
Fri 19th Jul 2019 21:56
Tommy, when I read the title "Semi tone", I am immediately thinking "half step". That smallest musical movement, imagined in a kiss, that gentle leaning in. Good stuff.
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raypool
Sat 20th Jul 2019 20:25
I'm always up for the musical stuff, and an image I had was a trumpet because of the word Valve which is also like another feminine word, to access which requires more than a sidestep.
It is a lovely lyrical idea and which works so well!
Ray