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Walk The Paths Well Trodden By The Brave

Walk the paths well trodden by the brave,

Live boldly my son, embrace your fears and let them drive you on,

Be master of your hurts not slave,

Value the story in your scars, pity those that have none.

 

Treasure every tear that rolls on your cheek,

Let them fall on barren ground knowing their waters bring life,

Their salt does not cleanse the lips of the meek,

In the same way as those that shoulder their strife.

 

Let your heart be broken a dozen times,

Rather than close it in fear of all that would break it,

In love be fierce but never blind,

Love true and honest so that none can mistake it.

 

Face your end with a defiant smile,

Recount all the steps that have led you hence,

Insist that the reaper tarry a while,

Enjoy a few moments at his expense.

 

And in that final time, when he asks,

Fix him with a gaze both firm and steady,

Acknowledge that he has, "Other tasks,"

And calmly say, "I'm ready."

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◄ Bye Dad

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Jason Bayliss

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 23:24

Thanks Kevin, I wrote this before my fathers death A couple of weeks ago now, maybe it's kind of what he'd indirectly told me in his lifetime, I decided I would tell my boys directly in mine.

J. x

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kJ Walker

Sat 3rd Aug 2019 09:06

Really good.
It reminded me a bit of "desiderata-Max Ehrmann", which I've just reread.
I've tried a couple of times to write a poem in this style and failed miserably each time.
Thanks for posting
Cheers Kevin

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 28th Jul 2019 23:09

Thanks "Heart," it's a tricky one, to love fiercely but not blindly. Some might suggest that requires a little cynicism, I would argue it's about self respect, you know, "You're no-ones second best."
I think maybe that's the balance that might be right.

J. x

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Heart of Lead

Sun 28th Jul 2019 16:06

Really powerful and yes, brave. "In love be fierce but never blind." You always have such amazing things to say in your poetry.

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Mae Foreman

Sat 27th Jul 2019 14:30

And he's back! Hope you are doing well.

Excellent poem. Very moving and so true. That at verse was haunting...

"And in that final time, when he asks,

Fix him with a gaze both firm and steady,

Aknowledge that he has, "Other tasks,"

And calmly say, "I'm ready."

It actually stirred a muffled little sob.

Thank you Jason ?
Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 26th Jul 2019 22:06

Thanks Lisa and Dorothy, it's the first thing I've written in a little while so it's much appreciated.

J. x

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Lisa C Bassignani

Fri 26th Jul 2019 21:17

Beautiful Jason.

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