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Crawl of the Caterpillar

If a butterfly decided
that it wanted to be a caterpillar
that it regretted its metamorphosis
that it would trade its powdery winged symmetry
for a few more hours or days of blind gluttony
arboreal mastication
that it did not want to flutter gracefully
admired desired
but to slowly gelatinously contract 
precariously 
along rough barked branch
to be more slug than swallow
more mundane than monarch
would I advise motivate inspire
pointing to the obvious
benefits of butterflying
the sunshine and light
the peaceful flower perch
the sweet nectar 
devoid of the bitterness 
of aged leaf
the security in the knowledge 
of avian indigestability
or accept
that the desire to stay exactly the same
to trade the trinkets of success
for the security of sameness
to be not part of the painted ladies or silver admirals
but simply to be alone and unknown
to Thoreau it all away
is as much a part of chrysalisian philosophy
as it is of all who want
to celebrate the simple
crawl of the caterpillar

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 27th Jul 2019 19:44

Thanks both of you for reading. Having people read what we write adds immeasurably to the experience I am discovering. I have been thinking a lot about intended audience as a concept both for poetry and just for living and suddenly here on this site I have not only an intended audience (other poets) but also a willing audience. So thank you for that and I will continue to enjoy your works as well.

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afishamongmany

Sat 27th Jul 2019 19:31

"to Thoreau it all away" lol - humour with depth!
Thank you Adam R a pleasure to hear and read.
Keep fluttering by,
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Devon Brock

Sat 27th Jul 2019 19:28

Great stuff Adam. "to Thoreau it all away" Nice touch. Love your poetry, as always.

D

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