Release of the Chameleon
<Deleted User> (7164)
Sat 13th Mar 2010 12:59
Phew! This seems to pack a punch.
Quite disturbing to find another and then another facet to a human psyche or human trait which comes unexpectedly and shocks.
I think this is saying 'give me stability any day. I can choose peace rather than this.'
Great poem,
Janet.x
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Sun 14th Mar 2010 11:31
hiya Dave,
Gosh she gave herself a hard time!
I guess in the end if one is going to self-destruct there is nothing anyone can do about it but are left with the emotional baggage of trying..just one nit and that was the 'and' in the last stanza it interupts the flow of your rhyme take it out and just use your comma.. :o)