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Like Trees

 

Like trees

young saplings we once were

bending in the wind

growing stronger

then we came to middle age

producing fruit

providing shade

now in the winter of our years

we are weaker and bent

we show our age

in twisted gnarled trunks

yet we celebrate the years we lived

and hope our arms

provided comfort

trees count in rings

we count our blessings.

 

 

 

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 15th Aug 2019 20:09

A charming analogy - citing the great life giver with us who often
fail in that respect, even going in the opposite destructive direction.

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keith jeffries

Thu 15th Aug 2019 16:19

A good poem
Keith

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Don Matthews

Thu 15th Aug 2019 14:45

This poem I cannot dk
Pull forth flippancy
It is too serious/meaningful
To try and flippant be

Nice and true poem
(Says he with old limbs creaking....)

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