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Forgot

Forgot coat

Nuisance

May get cold

 

Forgot water bottle

Annoying

Will get thirsty

 

Forgot map

Troublesome

May get lost

 

Forgot lunch

Bothersome

Will get hungry

 

Forgot wallet

Darn

May have to borrow

 

Forgot car radio front

Dangerous

Will have to listen to thoughts

 

Very dangerous

◄ A bad night

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Greg Freeman

Fri 19th Mar 2010 13:04

I used to drive home from work late at night, Dave, and often wanted to change channels when I listened to my thoughts. Music - especially John Martyn - used to help keep them at bay. Greg

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 18th Mar 2010 18:09

You wrote him another verse Janet
Forgot hot water bottle
Brrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Will get cold.

<Deleted User> (7164)

Thu 18th Mar 2010 13:16

This made me laugh at the end.
I can relate to it 'cos i know how dangerous it can be to listen to our own thoughts. Maybe not listen necessarily but to start arguing with yourself and trying to reason with yourself.. madness?
hmm.. sometimes a corker comes along and you think, wow where did that come from? :-)

there was a moment i had to go back in this with the water bottle though. I think because of the rhyme to forgot, i expected it to be 'hot' water bottle. I got it on the second read though. :-)

Janet.x

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Wed 17th Mar 2010 18:55

where were you walking??..interesting ending Dave..why so very dangerous hmm?..

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Francine

Wed 17th Mar 2010 16:55

Yes...
We can all relate to forgetting something.
I like the twist at the end - interesting... though I love to get lost
in my thoughts : )

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