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Searching

A heavy shadow in my heart

In this darkness I did start

To slowly drift and then to sway

And now I have been swept away

On a journey far and wide

A quest to find the light inside

The truest feelings of them all

Staggering, tho not to fall

I seek to know the truest love

And from this darkness rise above

To free my heart from shade and blight

To find the purest, whitest light

 

2019

◄ Dirty Little Secret

Another Happy Tuesday ►

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jennifer Malden

Thu 29th Aug 2019 20:03

Beautiful poem. Jennifer

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 26th Aug 2019 10:38

Thanks Kate and Adam.



May you all find your purest, whitest light

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Adam Rabinowitz

Mon 26th Aug 2019 05:32

This is wonderfully written.

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Mon 26th Aug 2019 00:30

The holy grail. Beautiful Lisa

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Lisa C Bassignani

Mon 26th Aug 2019 00:21

Thank you Don.
Thank you fish.

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Don Matthews

Sun 25th Aug 2019 23:52

Oh, I do like this Lisa. Why? It's got emotion. It rhymes. It's short and succint. And skillfully written. Well done.....

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afishamongmany

Sun 25th Aug 2019 15:29

Dear Lisa - Sing-song sadness. Search and you will find, is the promise.
May it be so
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