The Swallows
After the tall yellowed grass
of late summer is mown
white-bellied swallows
Ta chi ci ne tas
pour from mud-daubed
barn rafter nests
to feast
wide-mouthed in motion
blue green backs
shimmer-skimming
with streamer tails
along insect trails
We'd seen their babies
stubbly bald heads
raised above nest's lip
with flap-open mouths wide
three or four waiting
for delivery of smallest
motes of a meal
We'd seen then
their first fledged flights
brief
darker chests heaving
along fence rail
or barn roof spine
until a signal
to try again
Each season we'd fish one
out of the horse trough
its impossibly light and lifeless body
sodden
saddened we'd carry it
to thicker berry bramble
wishing that the soaring circles of its siblings
would not have lost this smallest bit of bird
There are different kinds of leaving
different kinds of journeys
but when the swallows are gone
the sky seems empty
Mae Foreman
Wed 18th Sep 2019 23:34
I can't decide what I enjoyed more, the conversation in the comment section or the poem itself! Great word Adam. I think swallows is a safe, reassuring choice when talking about separations. It leaves an aftertaste of hope, or wishful thinking that the parting is fickle! You want to send your kids out to the world, but I bet you'll miss them! I used the same bird in a different scenario...in mine the parting was more definite, nothing like the life affirming feeling of a life beginning, rather the opposite. Still the picture of swallows appeased the pain that comes with separation. That we may see each other again!?
Mae